Ashwood ~Loner

[Ashwood]

Name:Ashwood
Age:3
Gender:female
Pack:loner
Position:subdoinent
Looks like:Blue eyes,black tiped tail and ears, grey fur
pic:
history:She was born in her mathers pack and when she got old enough she decied to go to some other pack
RPing Example:Ash ran onto the forest icking up a scent and following it, it led her to some deer, she crouched down and waited for one to become vulnerabe or a weaker one. She spotted it then sprang up and lunged at the neck then brought it down and teared it up.
Codeword: The Code Word is in the Rules

[Bracken & Friends]

Hm... Please, MUCH more "meat" is history and RPing example! Also, please use compleat scentinces. Like: Ashwood ran onto the forest licking up a scent and following it. The scent led her to a delicous looking herd of deer. Crouching down, she waited for one to become vulnerabe or a weaker one. She spotted a deer limping from a bite a wolf had given it before Ashwood had ever seen the animal. Suddenly, and without any warning, she sprang up and lunged at the neck then brought it down. The herd stampded in the other direction while Ashwood began to eat the newly killed deer.

Something like that. ;D Other than that, I liked it! Do you want to be an Alpha in the loner pack?

[Ashwood]

ok

[Bracken & Friends]

K, so your subordinate of the loners! congrats! ;D

*moving*

*locking*